Aerin Elizabeth
Air-In. A-E-Ron. A-E-Rin. A-A-Ron. Shmaerin. All
types of Aerin used to summon my presence. All of these nick- names given to me
by friends and family. The meaning is “Better than the Best.” I do not know how
I got it or why it is mine, but it is all I could ever ask for in a name. It is
not very tame but in the end it all sounds the same.
Elizabeth. It was a gift given from heaven meaning “God’s
Perfection.” Passed down from my angel; she wrote a note with some direction,
saying to be good and give it all I could.
Aerin Elizabeth flows from the
tongue like water flows down a stream. But, once
said in a rage, I am trapped in a cage. Piece by piece it goes together
as a puzzle.
I belong to this name as it belongs to me.
I like how you said "all types of Aerin used to summon my presence"
ReplyDelete" it's not very tame but in the end it all sounds the same" great diction .!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you rhymed tame and same
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive I can tell you love your name your tone to it was proud as well, well done
ReplyDeleteI love when you write. I can always tell you put your best into what you do. I like your rhyme scheme.
ReplyDeleteDo you think your name makes you arrogant and I liked your rhyme
ReplyDeleteAerin,
ReplyDeleteYour last line "piece by piece it goes together as a puzzle" is very creative and unique. Well done.
The whole thing flowed nicely with the rhyme.
ReplyDeleteThat's funny how you said it comes from gods perfection passed down she wrote a note with some direction
ReplyDeleteYour tone was very positive. Well done
ReplyDeleteI like how you worded the first sentence in the second paragraph.
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ReplyDeleteI like where you said "but it's all I could ask for in a name. It is not very tame but in the end it all sounds the same
ReplyDeleteI liked your use of rhyme throughout. It all flowed well and made sense.
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ReplyDeleteLove the setup of your blogger account, it's very nice, but that's besides the point. Your poem was very nice, I like the meaning of your names, you used rhyming a lot and it was very nice.
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