Be able to do a cart wheel
Visit Brazil or Europe
Work in Disney World
Fulfill my future living plans with my best friend Lexie
I want to be known for my singing because I get a lot of compliments on it; but since I’m not in a choir anymore I don’t get to sing a lot. I would like to be able to do a cart wheel because I have been trying to do one since I was little and still can not do one. It has been like 8 years.. I would like to Visit Brazil or Europe. I would like to visit Brazil because my Aunt’s foreign exchange student was from there and it seemed like a really cool place to go to from all his stories about it. I would also like to visit Europe because it seems like there are many cool places to go there. It would also be pretty fun to travel around Europe visiting all the famous places. Plus it would help me get over my fear of traveling across the ocean with equanimity. I would like to work at Disney World because it seems like a very fun experience. My Aunt’s foreign exchange student did it last year and it always seemed like he was having a really fun time; and who wouldn’t want to be one of the princess?!? I want to fulfill my future living plans with my best friend Lexie because we have been planning this since 6th grade. We plan on living in a huge house with some of the nicest things. The only problem is we don’t know where; she wants to live in Texas but I prefer somewhere more up north.
There are two periods after 8 years, and I'm not sure if you meant too. Otherwise it was well written and I seen no other grammatical mistakes.
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